Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantage?
Museums are places which preserve history, tradition and many other essential things of a country. Nowadays, some museums require visitors to pay money for entrance fee while others are free to visit. Charging people for admission to museums may have both advantages and disadvantages. Personally, I suppose it brings more benefits than drawbacks.
The first advantage is that money collected from visitors can be used to maintain and develop museums. For instance, there are a lot of cost that museums have to pay, such as staff cost, repairing cost, and electric cost. Thus, people pay money for entrance ticket, which results in increasing financial source of museums because money invested by the government can not enough to pay all this cost. So charging admission to visiting helps museums to develop better and provide higher services.
Furthermore, when museums require people to pay fee to visit, visitors are likely to become more careful and pay more attention to historical values. For example, I will read detail information provided in museum if I have to buy entrance ticket. Because I want to get some values or knowledge from the money that I spend. As the result, admission fee encourages people to learn and gain more historical information of a country.
In conclusion, although admission charge will make some people feel uncomfortable, it also has several benefits helped visitors use maximum museum facilities and maintaining museums.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27467811159 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74335891966 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583690987124 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.414034593 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5384615385 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347028362238 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131556795907 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114906868694 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232977921033 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108430529107 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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