Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, the same products are easily purchased by people anywhere in the world, which leads to the fact that countries are likely to be more and more similar. Personally, I suppose this is a positive development for the world.
The first point that I am going to mention is easily buying local specialties of hometown in the foreign. In a majority of people, the ones who has gone to abroad feel difficult to assimilate into new culture, especially cuisine. For instance, one of my friends who has study in Germany said that she has missed Vietnamese foods a lot when she just arrived there. However, she can be easy to buys it even buy other countries’s local specialties in Germany. As a result, she feels less homesick and becomes more comfortable. In addition, she also has opportunities to try traditional cuisine all over the world.
Another positive development could be helping people explore and experience new technologies. In 2020, Apple which is a famous America’s company just introduced and launched a new product - iPhone12. This led to the fact that a lot of people wanted to purchase it. Thus, they could order or buy iPhone12 in any Apple stores in their country. As a result, people can experience new technologies as fast as possible and contribute to developing economic by purchasing many products.
In conclusion, globalization has revolutionized the whole world. I hope that such development should be continued in order to make the globe become a better place for the human.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buys'?
Suggestion: buys
...owever, she can be easy to buys it even buy other countries’s local specialties in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98412698413 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95426981939 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9417806409 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.7333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281693257365 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865028875077 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914744691543 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184559543344 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149182970596 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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