Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Museums are principally developed to preserve the history, arts and culture of a society. Therefore, charging money to visit in museum certainly aid with fund raising and avoiding chaotic situation in a certain time, however, demotivation in visiting and hamper in learning culture are primary disadvantageous results. While there are both the advantages and disadvantages associated with charging, I entirely believe that merits take precedence over the demerits.
Fund raising is the definite advantages of admission fee in museum among other multitudinous benefits. To delve into this, the collection received from fee are used for the development of the museum, which in the long run bring positive atmosphere in the site. Ticket system to enter museum will control the crowd around the sites which is an added benefit. Only the interested individuals will go there to learn and to gain knowledge. A recent survey published in a journal stated that about 43% people will not visit museum in London if the fee increase who often visit for entertainment purpose.
However, the obvious disadvantage is it demotivate the visitors. Charging fee cause the learners to pay extra budget expenditure from their daily expenses that brings pressure among the students. So, they deprive from learning about the traditional, artistic view of their precursors. For instance, nearly half of students visit the national museum of Bangladesh freely which would not be same if admission fee started to apply. Despite this, these issue can easily addressed through providing scholarships to the learners and, thus, pose only a minor threat to the advantageous aspects.
In conclusion, admission fee for museum will eventually be beneficial as chaotic situation can be controlled and development progression of museum can be undertaken which outweigh the demerit students financial difficulties, that after properly addressed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'address'
Suggestion: address
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51700680272 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95053862704 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608843537415 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6648708873 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.857142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289550542539 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086183969987 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061819325204 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165453557066 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251174904855 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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