Many people are working longer hours. Why is this happening? What problems can this cause to people?
It is true that spending more time at work is more common in recent years. There are a number of reasons for this trend, but I believe that the effects may be damaging to health and family life.
There are two major reasons why people are at risk of becoming workaholics. Firstly, they are overworking due to the pressure from daily necessities and work. This can be explained by the fact that In many cities, due to the escalating living cost, people are made to work extra hours to afford lives. In other words, overworking now is not an option but rather an obligation for many people to survive. Secondly, since the competition at work is becoming more intense than ever, few people now have a steady job. Thus, they willingly accept a heavy workload to avoid being redundant. They reckon that taking on more responsibilities can help them and their organizations thrive.
The harmful effects on health and family life are serious. It is undeniable that working extra hours will financially benefit people at the cost of their mental and physical health. This means that overworking will put a person under immense pressure, which can make his health deteriorate and cause stress-related illnesses. Furthermore, In terms of family life, overworking can accelerate one’s professional growth, however, will leave them little time for themselves and their families. They are less likely to gain work-life balance and will risk the well-being of their close relationships, exposing them to depression and isolation in the future.
In conclusion, While it is understandable why people are spending more time at work, I believe that the merits it brings are not worth the price one needs to pay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01766784452 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7874730256 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56890459364 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2758022194 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267301464571 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854307837541 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751799032383 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153185188914 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699855228509 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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