Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?
More and more people argue that socially destructive behaviours and disrespectful attitude to others have been recently on the rise. This essay will suggest that these developments are driven by the availability of violent content in social media and a worsening living conditions of the population, and then propose that possible solutions can be establishing new regulations and providing funding for social needs.
While social media sources are widely available all over the world, there are a few regulations in place to control the quality of information presented online. Furthermore, majority of social networks are free to use and extremely easy to register in, which attracts terroristic organisations that are keen to expand the influence. As a result, calls for social protests reach real people, slowly changing their values and views. Another reason that promotes anti-social behaviour and contributes to the lack of respect for government leaders is a recession that many countries are going through at the moment. Affecting living standards all over the world, a dare economic situation pushes people to the streets to complain and criticise responsible authorities. For instance, Ghana, the poorest country of Africa, has the highest rate of riots in the region.
One of the possible solutions for these problems can be a specific law, demanding media providers to block harmful content. To further address this issue, these companies can be obliged to report authors of the blocked information to authorities in power. To address the lack of respect, governments should arrange social subsidies, helping the poorest cohort of society. Not only this promotes better attitude towards people in power, this also gives individuals a sense of stability, reducing their stress and irritation and encouraging respectful behaviours. Indonesia is a prime example, where in 2020 after the announcement of $1000 subsidy to people in need, crime rate dropped by 20% in the same year.
In conclusion, by allocating additional funds for social support and strengthening social media regulations it is possible to address problems of socially harmful behaviours and absence of respect for others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'condition'?
Suggestion: condition
... in social media and a worsening living conditions of the population, and then propose tha...
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Line 5, column 637, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'subsidy' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'subsidies'.
Suggestion: subsidies
...e in 2020 after the announcement of 000 subsidy to people in need, crime rate dropped b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49705882353 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92269931404 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591176470588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7720458778 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257111357039 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815109772852 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603166601297 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158061212431 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211685318986 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.