Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films.
Why could this be?Should governments give more financial support to local film
industries?
It is apparent that the popularity of western films surpasses the locally produced movies. This essay will outline prominent points to trigger this phenomenon, and in my perspective, governments had better take their role to financially support movies in local areas.
Some motives emerge with regard to the shift of people's movie preference nowadays. First and foremost, the great concept of making films ,done by international movie productions, yields an astonishing masterpiece to be watched by movie lovers. This is due to the high-end tools, as well as the sophisticated technology, which exceptionally contributes to make incompatible movies in a high quality indeed. Second of all, it is indisputable that numerous local movie producers are scarce to have adequate funds in order to make good movies, vis-à-vis the cinematography effects, and so forth. As a consequence, the impression in the eyes of viewers is less than the expectation.
The idea referring to the government's support in funding local movies is brilliant. The initial reason is how the money can be , on point , allocated to send movie producers in a local nation to get higher knowledge regarding movie-making skills or else. The other underlying aspect is the availability of supported and needed tools whose functions are crucial in creating interesting movies. To exemplify, the implementation of the latest technology, called CGI, is possible to be added from the budget. Ultimately, those two aforementioned steps eventually boost the quality of locally produced films in a hope of enticing people's interest, either local or international individuals.
All in all, the superior produced movies , resulting in marvelous films to watch , and the hardships to compete owing to non-supported tools are reasons for this matter. I firmly believe authorities' role is essential to assist the probability of local movies domination in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, so, well, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44816053512 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19429326454 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.72831849 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292175677366 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996868716347 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700861859261 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194111834669 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500162734267 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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