Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In recent years, there has been a heated debate about whether continuing to go to university to earn a degree or getting a job after graduation will help students find decent jobs in the future. I agree with the first viewpoint, while as far as I am concerned, obtaining a university diploma should not be regarded as the only path to a good job.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why some people believe that a university degree is a crucial component in obtaining employment. First of all, a university degree is mandatory for some kind of job. To become a doctor, a teacher, or a pilot, you need to complete a course of university education. For example, almost schools and universities accept people who have graduated from university or had higher degrees. This is because most of those who work in educational institutions take the responsibility for imparting knowledge. Second, having a university degree can enhance job opportunities and help you have a satisfactory income. It is obvious that competent people are always considered by recruiters for good positions. Therefore, completing the university entrance test and earning a university degree is proof that you have the essential knowledge and abilities to satisfy the work criteria.
On the other hand, many individuals believe that working after leaving school is a useful method to obtain practical experience. To begin with, some vocations, such as chef, mechanic, and fashion designer, demand more practical expertise than theoretical knowledge. Chef, for example, is a job that necessitates greater practical abilities. They should be able to master a variety of cooking abilities in addition to having a thorough understanding of food. Accordingly, young people will obtain greater experience if they are exposed to a professional working atmosphere from an early age. Another point worth noting is having a job after graduation will provide pupils with a variety of life skills. As a result, they will be more self-sufficient and mature than their peers.
To sum up, a university degree is necessary to obtain employment, and it is a prerequisite for both domestic and foreign businesses. However, we must not overlook the value of experience and how it may assist a worker to find a variety of career opportunities.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15119363395 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0766257974 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549071618037 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6852596434 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.210526316 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.89473684211 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218769116429 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650120630409 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429345839151 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118859097891 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433246672015 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15119363395 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0766257974 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549071618037 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6852596434 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.210526316 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.89473684211 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218769116429 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650120630409 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429345839151 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118859097891 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433246672015 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.