Many people think that some individuals are naturally good leader. others think that people can learn leadership skills. Discuss both views.
It is true that some people are leaders by birth. However, many thought that it can be learned on emphasized. This essay will intend to analyse both views along with my perspective.
To begin with, people who are born with leadership qualities are gifted ones. To elaborate it, people with birth leadership status are more competent to readily compete with others on a large scale. To epitome it, the childrens of leaders are future politicians whom competition level is so high because of their past or their political background. They had qualities to compete with their competents in every field on a wide range. They had more voters than the opposiing party because of the nepotism. peole who born with leadership qualities are more preffered by the people in every field of life because of their presence of mind and their confidence. Thus, individuals with birth leadership skills had great influence on other people from a very little age.
Secondly, some people thought that leadership skills are learnt by a person. In other words, the leadership quality can be learned in every field of life just by acquiring knowledge or confidence. To illustrate it, Abraham Lincoln was an American President who serve the nation through political crisis. He belongs to a poor family but his dedication towards our nation make him succeed. Hence, leadership can be acquired by a person in any time of their life with the knowledge and dedication.
In conclusion, there are many ways to become a leader and I am convinced that leadership skills can be learnt if learners are enthusiastic
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thought seems to be countable; consider using: 'many thoughts'.
Suggestion: many thoughts
...e people are leaders by birth. However, many thought that it can be learned on emphasized. T...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y compete with others on a large scale. To epitome it, the childrens of leaders ar...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Peole
...pposiing party because of the nepotism. peole who born with leadership qualities are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, in other words, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00754716981 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68582768347 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6624770689 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26266994557 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989306176204 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819327387744 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181091641611 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446694410459 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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