Many people use social media to get in touch with other people and know about news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that in recent years, a tremendous number of individuals have used the internet for communication and keeping up to date with recent events. While there are some clear drawbacks of this trend, I would argue these are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, there are two major disadvantages that people may face when using social media. Firstly, the overuse of social media may cause communication disorders. Although social media is a strong tool for communication between individuals regardless of geographical distances, it causes detrimental effects on face-to-face communication skills such as hand signs or postures. Consequently, a person who abuses this type of communication may lose the communication skills that are essential for every daily life activities. Secondly, the overwhelming flow of news could raise confusion about the authenticity of news. With the exceptional growth of the internet, many criminals are taking advantage of the internet and spreading fake news, and toxic content to serve their own purposes, which causes a threat to national security if the information on the mass media is misused.
On the other hand, the benefits are more significant than such disadvantages. One reason for that is the huge contribution of the mass media to the economics of the world. Because of how easy it is for one person to connect with other people around the world, it gives opportunities for one country to promote the process of importing and exporting commodities and resources by setting up communication methods through the internet, for instance, emailing or online meetings. Therefore, It promotes trading between businesses around the world and leads to the skyrocketing economy of nations around the globe. Another reason for this is a good tool as a source of information. If people can find a reliable media channel, they can take advantage of the vast and trustworthy information to their interest, both economically and for the sake of safety. The weather forecast or the fluctuation in the prices of gold can be taken as good examples if people can utilize their tool.
In conclusion, despite the threat to users' health and national security, the merits that benefit the economy and informants have outweighed the mentioned demerits.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-07-21 | Vivi_peach | 89 | view |
| 2023-07-21 | Zeroplague0407 | 78 | view |
- Many young people today change their jobs or careers every few years More advantages than disadvantages 67
- Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays What are the reasons for this What can be done to solve this problem Task 2 Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays What are the reasons for 73
- People nowadays tend to have children at older ages What are the reasons Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 67
- Today more people are overweight than ever before What in your opinion are the primary causes of this What are the main effects of this epidemic 73
- Historical objects should be brought back to their country of origin To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27322404372 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05095234171 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1829849735 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.625 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198232322113 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624700886561 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561637704415 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971741114423 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605979332272 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.