Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a
successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
A number of people argue that participating in higher education is the best way to succeed at work, while others think finding a job after high school graduation would be a better choice. It is. While I accept that going straight for a job could bring a lot of benefits, I would argue that going to college may bring better-paid job opportunities.
On the one hand, there are two main benefits to finding a job early. The first and foremost reason is that people get a chance to gain first-hand experience earlier than undergraduates.
As young people have the characteristics of being energetic and not afraid to change, they have the likelihood of becoming potential employees by being able to quickly absorb and adapt to the workplace. Therefore, they may grow exceptionally well from the experience, faster than college students. Furthermore, they can be professionals in the field they decide to join. Being able to focus on one thing that you love may boost motivation and increase the productivity of one’s personal learning, which, compared to college students who learn subjects in multiple fields, seems to be more efficient.
On the other hand, it is clear that attending college or university brings great benefits to an individual's future career. Firstly, college gives students the chance to socialize with great individuals who perform exceptionally in academic and practical science. In other words, not only can people learn from insightful professors who have numerous experiences, but they can also have a chance to gain a recommendation for an internship from those professors. Consequently, increasing the opportunities to earn a high-paying job. Secondly, people can earn a degree, which is a must-have condition if they want to become managers or higher. These degrees or diplomas are evidence of the knowledge of one employee, which makes one person prioritized in a line of candidates with different talents and experiences.
In conclusion, despite the merits of finding a job without attending college, I strongly believe that studying at a college brings a better future for a person's career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
... or university brings great benefits to an individuals future career. Firstly, college gives s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20408163265 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07226109893 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562682215743 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.568202764 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207014277004 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611071184415 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067665383662 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12359842022 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806368935626 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.