Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention in school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?
A common issue that many students may relate recently and try to find out a way to solve is being hard to concentrate in school. As part of them, I would like to discuss about the main causes and straightforwardly delivery some practical solutions as well.
One of the most common reason is lacking interest. When they are made to do the things they are not concerned about, paying attention is the cause of forcing. For example, there is a student who love maths, and all the things he can think of in art class is about how to draw the circles with the similar size instead of enjoying playing with colors. Therefore, the attention does not come naturally. To simply help students deal with it, school can contribute to introduce more optional subjects that students are able to choose to learn. The concentration will be increased when students are free to do what they love.
Beside the favor affection, mental health actually involve in making learners find it hard to focus on coursework. The mental illnesses as depression, anxiety, ADHD, etc are scientifically proven to impair the brain development and damage the focus system. For instant, literally, loosing attention now is listed as one of the symptoms of the illnesses addressed; and many diagnosed patients notify that they cannot focus on any kind of works for even five minutes straight. To promptly prevent the consequence, the school attendants themselves should notice their mental health and ask for the treatment as soon as possible. Beside that, school managers are also responsible for building up the psychology consultants team to send help to anyone feeling the need. The pupils that receive the support on time will sooner recover and be more passionate for the subjects.
To sum up, the absence of interest and poor mental health accurately lead to loose focusing among many students. To face these issues, introducing more flexibility into the curriculum and evolving mental health care system should be recognized and administrated.
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- People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful Others say that those who contribute to society like scientists teacher are the most successful Discuss both and give your opinion 84
- Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention in school What are the reasons What could be done to solve this problem 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05688622754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74071830122 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610778443114 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6522548495 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205389971687 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614870860212 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688450725608 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114381348994 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622391303897 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.