Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?
Recently, there has been an alarming trend of students who find struggling to focus on lessons at school. This can be explained by many underpinning factors such as social media platforms, internet, or impractical lessons. This essay will attempt to discuss in more depth these factors and detailed solution.
To begin with, there is no doubt that many students being distracting at school is caused by various underpinning factors. One leading reason is the distractions from social networking applications. Many social media platforms such as Facebook, TikTok, and Instagram has a significant impact on young people and it takes up most of their time. It can be said that notifications from these apps attract students to give up something and start using it. Another note-worthy cause of this problem is from lecturers. Many of them seem to use a wide range of traditional teaching approaches and theoretical assignments at school. Therefore, they may find it difficult to attract their students in lessons.
There are several actions that could be taken to solve this problem. First of all, schools should be imposed a complete ban of portable devices in classrooms. All students' devices should be stored in secure room and they just take it out after class ends. This would be effective because there is no potential distractions from social media platforms or smartphones. Furthermore, educators should redesign teaching approaches to attract students' attention, boost engagement between lecturers and students, and enhance the quality of teaching as well as studying. For example, some business universities need to incorporate with enterprises to create more interesting extracurricular activities such as visiting these companies and learn more about the way of businessman working. This would be better than just learning some theoretical lessons without applying real skills. Therefore, these students will be more likely to focus on lessons, ensuring higher chances after graduation.
In conclusion, the great numbers of students pay little attention at school due to the advent of many social media platforms, internet, or boring lessons. Moreover, I believe that if schools can combine these aforementioned things, they can attract more students to engage in class.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 554, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Many of them seem to use a wide range of traditional teaching approaches and theo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47175141243 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94049886297 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579096045198 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8122403373 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.85 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286126369446 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885276463585 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617853027727 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176907122499 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234869182256 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 554, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Many of them seem to use a wide range of traditional teaching approaches and theo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47175141243 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94049886297 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579096045198 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8122403373 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.85 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286126369446 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885276463585 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617853027727 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176907122499 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234869182256 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.