Many university students live with their family, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
Nowadays, while many students are able to live close to their families during university, others, because of the long distances, have to live in different places in order to persuade their studies. Each of these states has its own pros and cons.
On the one hand, those students who live with family have certain benefits. First, the clearest advantage of home situation is money saving. In fact, receiving supports from their parents, students might not need to pay accommodation or even living expenses such as food, electricity or internet costs. Secondly, there is nothing like home, where students have the most comfortable zone to live without chaos from roommates or burdened concerns like cooking or cleaning room. however, there are several demerits of living with family. family disciplines might limit young people in socialize with friends and other relationship which sometimes may lead to the stuffy and stressful feelings as a result.
On the other hand, living far away from family also has both benefits and drawbacks. It cannot be denied that almost youngsters like freedom, which can easily be obtained by living themselves during student life. In other words, students could avoid interferences of their parents in making study decisions, forming friendship or identifying future objects. however, there are also difficulties to mention. students might easily suffer lonely and homesick, especially when they are in troubles and need the sharing from their closet person.
In conclusion, no matter staying in or leaving parents’ arms, students have to face with countless challenges beside generous benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4431372549 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64129801604 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4595794564 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376988352566 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112968297616 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799885771859 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199300181549 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899900924135 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.