In many workplaces, online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Thanks to the developments the many features, mankind is now having a convenient and full-rounded life that most of them activities are now supported by technologies. Therefore, it is claimed that people nowadays rely to much on online communication than an interactive way, specifically in workplaces. This essay believes that though it's good to have supports from machines, a face to face communication is still one of the most important part of human life that its advantages totally outweigh its adversary.
On one hand, due to the civilization, citizens are now under pressure much more often than they were in the past, therefore a help from a call may save their precious time rather than meetings their clients or friends offline. Surprisingly, a vast majorities of people find that it would be more comfortable texting while sitting at their work place in comparison to have a real chat. For example, workers can just lye on the chair and use 'messenger' or 'what's app' as a method to commute with their friends or even customers. Although this sounds appealing to most workers, particularly the young ones, acting like this would easily lead to misunderstanding and lack of emotions in some circumstances in working areas or also relationships.
On the other hand, though communicating directly would probably cause some wastes of time or money for transporting, it's still the fundamental thing that human was born with. Blatantly, the social would be awkward and senseless if people keep attaching theirs attentions towards technological devices. Last but not least, concretely in workspaces where a lot of communicating are required, it is a win-win when you are having a interactive chat with your partner when it lets you to put your emotions and thoughts with no hurdle which drives not only you but others have more trusts and more understanding to each-other. For instance, texting to your clients is sometimes considered to be impolite and show no respect to them, as regard solemn customers. Yet, taking real chat is a crucial and most effective way in order not to undermine pupils natures.
In conclusion, despite online chatting gives us benefits in saving time and fasten our communication, directly speaking's advantages stand out in many aspects from preserving our natures to building trusts between human and human.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Suggestion: majority
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16010498688 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01557556118 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6073363845 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.230769231 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3076923077 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174443427728 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498136999318 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520293922165 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101319911539 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691029691061 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.