Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is agrue that missions to explore space are really expensive and there are problems on Earth which demand attention, so the number of these missions needs to be decreased. From my point of view, i totally agree with this notion since Missions to explore space is not hugely significant for the individuals. The following essay will analyse this statement indetail.
At first, in the international world the demand, imagination and curiosity of people about the space is incease graduately. Some country invest too much money on the missions to explore space, this trend is very wasted and unnecessary. The state can use this financial to develop in the fields which is more important with individuals's life such as medical, entertainment and education. Furthermore, a plenty of missions to explore space will lead hugely affection to our Earth, some debris from spaceship may detroy crops of farmars and make goble warmer. To illustrate, in 1986 the space shuttle Challenger exploded 73 seconds after takeoff, killing all on board. In addition, government can invest these money to have bright plan for the youngs generation who will contribute their ability to the development of the nation.
However, on some positive aspect missions to explore space will bring to the individuals more interesting news knowledge and improving their information about galaxy, time and space. For instance, in 2020 some science have an appotunity to explore amazing reaction of the sun though telescope Hi-C of Nasa which is the biggest and most successful business about space exploration. Moreover, in the history there are a lot of chance to explore the space, it bring a plenty of wonderful knowledge for the human's life.
Tto conclude, by my reason and agruement from these essay i mostly agree with this statement because these drawbacks to the social, but we can not negate that missions to explore space do not have any value to us. government need to have bright plan to improve the social and citizen's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08484848485 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70046759887 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0896076301 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357822129888 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120208174664 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136423761051 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236787022894 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126844288146 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.