Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Like two sides of a coin there are arguments pertaining to the number of visits to space owing to the cost factor. I have shared views pertaining to the importance of such trips.
Firstly, people are always curious to explore unknown places. Space is not an exception. With the development of technology people's dependance and the expectation greatly increased alongside. Satellites, which are launched cater to the demand for internet in mobile devices along with collection of data for scientific and research purposes.In addition such technology helps government identify, target and eliminate terrorist threats. For example, Tatasky is a service provider for television who has used such satellites to broadcast their program. This is made possible only through various missions to outer space.
Secondly, problems that exists on earth can be solved either through peaceful negotiation or forcefully through war. Such problems should not be a barrier to development in other fields. Moreover, solving such problems would take time and also the involvement of various countries based on the nature of the issue faced. Nowadays, many countries are sharing their resources to send shuttles to space. Not only has it paved way for sharing of expenses for a collective benefit, but also has brought a countries closer. For Instance, India had launches many rockets to space which held satellites of various countries and also from various research institutes. The space occupied by the satellites will be paid for by the respective country or institutes.
To conclude, exploring space and the cost that is involved in it is necessary as it holds various reasons. The cost is widely spread among the countries that come together for mutual benefit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33935018051 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7715194335 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4960357983 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158581368081 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497354716077 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269901183666 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827557643856 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362990609321 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.