More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems cause this issue? What do you think are the possible solutions?
It is undoubtedly that many individuals settling in developing nations increasingly have a desire to buy cars for the first time. There are several causes and considerable solutions that I will elaborate more below.
Regarding the causes, the increasing car purchase in developing countries is provoked by inner circle incitement, they crave on compliment in public. Particularly Indonesia, the individuals perceive their well-being and prosperity in productive age, in which they prefer purchasing certain cars, Toyota Yaris and Pajero Sport, as a feeling of bragging their success. Furthermore, considering a bewildering variety of offences committed in public transports. Due to the high social disparity, the perpetrators deliberately target passengers (children and women) to pickpocketing. Reported by the U.S. public transit networks, some recorded cases of homicide, even assault and theft cases significantly increase in such transport system.
Turning to the solutions, the local authorities might provide mass transit more convenience to make citizen switch to mass transit.Specifically, high security system and additional mass transport (timetable and routes) increase passengers’ safety and comfort feelings. In addition, if the authority restricts the use of diesel fuel (four-wheel vehicles) and enacts heavier taxes on car ownership, individuals will think twice to buy cars. This policy fosters eco-friendly living and support net zero emission through the Sustainable Development Goals, in order that young future generations could experience what Earth has given to human.
In conclusion, the causes of higher interest in buying a car in developing countries today include a trend of flaunting wealth and insecure feelings in public transit. Meanwhile, the plausible solutions are considered the improvement of safe and comfort transport facilities and law enforcement of car use reduction.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Specifically
... to make citizen switch to mass transit.Specifically, high security system and additional ma...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89530685921 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24820284514 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678700361011 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9037963374 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208502086494 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668771235148 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580793620545 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130296031114 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687045077079 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.24 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.1 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Specifically
... to make citizen switch to mass transit.Specifically, high security system and additional ma...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89530685921 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24820284514 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678700361011 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9037963374 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208502086494 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668771235148 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580793620545 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130296031114 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687045077079 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.24 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.1 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.