More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other products from well-known brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
There has been a growing number of people who want to possess attires, vehicles from luxurious brands for their high-quality and their demonstration of social status.In my view, this proved to be an optimistic progress.
There are two main compelling reasons why products of luxurious brands are becoming the preferred options of a high number of consumers. Firstly, luxurious brands provide their customers with high-quality products. To be precise, a piece of clothing made of finest fabric is likely to be in form and outlast ordinary ones, therefore, gives the wearers the best experience. Furthermore, a prime-quality car ensures drivers’ safety in unexpected situations. For example, many cars of Ford- a well-known car brand- are integrated with auto hold technology which aids avoid objects when operated in urban areas. This thus helps drivers stay safe when confronted with minor mishaps. Secondly, the tendency of more people purchasing items from luxurious brands stems from their desire to show off wealth and social status. To illustrate, brands of clothes such as Hermes, Channel have a high reputation in the fashion industry, therefore, peope are likely to attribute those who wear garments from such brands to rich kids
In my opinion, this trend brings a variety of expecting merits. To begin with, the consumption of luxurious brands’ products helps to promote thriving economy in countries whose these merchandises are produced. To illustrate, Toyota went from obscurity to one of the world’s largest automakers, Toyota contributes to accelerating Japan’s GDP and turns it into a prosperous nation as it is today. In addition, the increasing preference for luxurious brand names plays a vital role in promoting environmental sustainability. As more people purchase of high-quality items, the frequency of torn clothes thrown away every year is lowered. As a result, this saves Mother nature from being attacked by tons of fast-fashion garbage
In conclusion, the tendency of people purchasing items from large brand names are explained by their quality and symbolic feature. This trend possibly bring positive effects when it comes to environment and national economy
- More and more people want to buy clothes cars and other products from well known brands What are the reasons Do you think it is a positive or negative development 89
- Technology development has enriched and facilitated our everyday life with hundreds of applications thus offering plenty of job opportunities to menial workers from superficial look such jobs substantially satify social demands but they in fact retard bot 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46627565982 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94313924401 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609970674487 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3928996653 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.266666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1333333333 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213586756033 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663956123061 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456391556006 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12154854874 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460395297516 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.