more and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other products from well-known brands. what are the reasons? do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In contemporary society, it is generally believed that there is an increasing number of buyers who engage in purchasing luxurious items produced by renowned branding ranging from garments, cars and other kinds of products. The following essay will examine the root causes of this trend as well as providing explanations to prove my view that this change would bring more negative consequences rather than positive influences.
For a variety of reasons, some people follow this trend as of two main drivers. The first reason is that they want to be attractive in the eyes of public. Take young generation in Vietnam as a salient example. Most of youngsters in this country who aged from 15 to 18 years old, they tend to put on expensive pieces of clothes with appealing patterns to show off their social status along with the desire to be gorgeous all the time. Therefore, their self-image can be constantly maintained in a positive way. Secondly, popular brands would bring high-quality products which could draw the attention of many customers. For instance, Mercedes Benz, which is a global manufacturer of cars and has a long history of making vehicles, has been successfully in generating huge profit from its innovative models being designated with features including auto-driving mode or even virtual maps. As a result, people who choose to own these kinds of products often seek novel experience with significant creativity.
However, such kind of development would do more harm than good. The first worth-mentioning negative consequence is the long-term reliance on parents if teenagers keep putting costly attires to their cart. To elaborate, because of being unqualified to join in the labor force, the young might not value the money made by their parents. Consequently, if there is no parental supervision or guidance, they are likely to engage in a passive way of living resulting in getting involved in social evils such as stealing. Furthermore, high-quality products coming from well-known brands are not always affordable for all of buyers. To be specific, only upper-class citizens and high-income earners may be competent enough to get a luxurious car with up-to-date functions. Hence, those who suffer from financial difficulties might find it hard to possess one leading to a sense of being left behind and depression.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that more and more people are getting to buy products from famous brands because of having a desire to show off and owning good quality items. However, this might result in negative consequences such as the involvement of bad behaviors and being unaffordable for low-income earners.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the youngsters') or simply say ''Most youngsters''.
Suggestion: Most of the youngsters; Most youngsters
...ration in Vietnam as a salient example. Most of youngsters in this country who aged from 15 to 18 ...
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Line 2, column 491, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...self-image can be constantly maintained in a positive way. Secondly, popular brands would bring h...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a passive way" with adverb for "passive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... or guidance, they are likely to engage in a passive way of living resulting in getting involved...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2265.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25522041763 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95476526224 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610208816705 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8720704498 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.210526316 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6842105263 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05263157895 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240291760983 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628271126694 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595338057209 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146887459554 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286274252812 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.