More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays people are craving for purchasing commodities such as garments or vehicles based on their popularity. This phenomenon resulted from several reasons and it may bring negative impact on both individual and society
On the one hand, there is a variety of explanations for why people desired for buying goods related to famous brands. First and foremost, using it can bring to the owner with a great sense of satisfaction. There seem to be shreds of evidence that luxurious items are symbolized for the upper-class and numerous people buying them as a testimony of their wealth and opulence. Furthermore, there are several occupations that their appearance is quite important and hence they chose these items. Singers, actors or models, to mention but a few. Secondly, it is due to the influence of famous people. It is irrefutable that most celebrities are representing a well-known label. Consequently, their followers will buy things associated with these brands as a means of supporting their idols. Finally, reputable brands are believed to offer products with high quality and reliability. Apple, which phone is recognized for the user-friendly and world-class security, is a good case in point.
Nevertheless, using these commodities may also cause various drawbacks to the owners. First of all, having excessive consumption of high-end products may lead to financial challenged. This is shown by numerous people, especially youngsters, who do not take it into careful consideration before purchase famous brands' goods and sink into debt sooner or later. In the second place, it may lead to a materialistic society. It reportedly caused people to be more greedy and jealous of others, therefore forcing them to strive for work and morally decayed them. Last but not least, the famous brand may lose the motivation to improve themselves. As the customer buying things based on their name instead of the quality, it is unnecessary to update the commodities' features.
To sum up, the famous brand products sold well because it is a symbol of the elite class, it is represented by celebrities and its high-quality. However, over-purchasing it may lead to financial stress, make the brand's company lost the motivation or even lead to a consumerist society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as, first of all, to sum up, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25344352617 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00938686818 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573002754821 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5066374247 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.35 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165611792247 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409600635174 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362682119126 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895281810621 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278543396289 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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