The most essential component of a person’s life is his or her time at the workplace, and life turns meaningless once no job satisfaction is obtained. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that the most important component of a individual's life is their time at the workplace, and life turns unneccessary one no job satisfaction is abtained. From my point of view, in some situation a mostly agree with this notion because of ít benefits for the resident life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearence of modern techology that the requiprement of people have increased gradually, so job satisfaction is greatly significant for the society and. Not only will this phenomenon be the motivation and inspiration for the employee which improve their mentality life and productivities, but also the creative and imagination of staff can be advanced which have positive affection for the economic background of their company. Furthermore, the propotion of strike will be reduce dramatically where all agent fell confortable with their occupation, rising the business's improvement. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Joro Qui, the famous interviewer and professor, which is expert about the success of european's business which the manager are concentrate on the satisfaction of their worker. The statistic demonstrated that nearly every companies has got plenty of achievement.
However, we can not negate the drawback of this problem for the people activities. Numerous people will delay their jobs when they fell stress or pressure, this trend will be hugly dangerous with large business. Moreover, high ego can be put in the occupation by many postgraduate and they will quit their company if they fell uncomfortable or boring. Various harmful influence will be led by this action to the young generation.
To conclude, though my agrument from the essay, i totally agree with this statement, but it still have some negative aspect for the society. The government need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the development of their nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26837060703 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99976692402 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600638977636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2156441559 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112630029069 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441325437794 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926854140865 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896625910007 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114745566517 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.