Parents often give children everything they ask and let they do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?
Today, there is an ongoing trend among parents towards trying to accommodate their children's every demand and giving them more personal freedom. In this essay, i am going to demonstrate how this child- rearing practice is detrimental to children before arguing that it may have long-term repercussions that continue into their adulthood.
Many compelling reasons are given to justify the trend of pestering offspring. First, as parents accommodate their children that is the main determinant for children to be over-reliant on parents. This dependence may deprive them of the motivation to work towards their own goals, which does their academic performances a disservice, for instance. Due to very hectic schedule in work and in life, parents have to work all the time so they have a norm of granting every request from their kids which make children lack of both independent and self-control living. For example, by giving children a lot of allowances without any observations that is a facet to impulses their money to purchase what they like, leading to breaking the bank.
I opine that these disadvantageous results of this issue infinitely overshadows its advantage. People’s personalities are shaped at an early age, and without parents’s close supervision, children maybe vulnerable to negative influences and adopt harmful habits. Many Vietnamese kids use profanities from a very young age because their parents allows to play games at Internet café where cursing is the norm. There are many documents from experts that have pointed out that a lot of crimes originate in rebellious adolescence, so having an unsupervised childhood is one of the causes of being a criminal.
In conclusion, granting all of the kids’ requests does serious harm to their personal development. By contrast, this exercise should be prevented to give the kids a more healthy life without drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97466898252 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7913951677 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.461538462 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17252106759 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596859355738 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766539272776 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905093146454 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839865410783 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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