The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem (126715)
migration rate of labor forces from villages to cities has increased significantly in recent years. As a consequence, most of the cities all over the world are becoming overcrowded, unable to provide basic human amenities. Moreover, the agricultural production is harshly affected by lack of adequate farming forces.
As more people enters the cities in search of better income and improved standard of living, the cities have to increase its capacity to support the increasing population. Unfortunately, being unable to manage the new-comers, the authorities face unparallel challenges maintaining supply chain, medical facility as well as housing space. so the people living in these cities are not ensured with basic human needs. Furthermore, the agricultural areas, which contribute directly to the gross domestic production of an economy, are faced with scarcity of labor forces. In 2018, for instance, India reported to have decreased agricultural production, though its unemployment rate increased comparatively, indicating that though people are looking for work, agricultura industry is not getting required workers. Relocating citizens have negative impact both on the city life as well as on the national economy.
To solve the problem, the prime cause has to be addressed, which is the difference in between city income and village income. The responsible authority can work on mitigating income differences all over the country to discourage everyone from looking for better income. Then again, some of them are looking for better standard of living. so ensuring basic human needs all over the nation can also provide the people with mental peace. By ensuring income and lifestyle, the migration rate can be kept in check, without impacting the cities and national economy.
To conclude, every city has a limit to serve a number of people, after which the whole system attempts to collapse. Similarly, the agriculture industry requires a good number of people to continue production smoothly. By taking initiatives to reduce the interest of migration, this is possible to keep both the cities as well as the production areas running.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...his is possible to keep both the cities as well as the production areas running.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, similarly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47305389222 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89088872504 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550898203593 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4551098992 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.529411765 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192952477428 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584015618028 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442321930701 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108307498648 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458655015825 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.