New technologies have changed the way children their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
The issue of introducing new technology is one that has been debated increasingly over the past few years. At this point, some claim that the new technology is advantageous and gives various and interesting experiences for children compared to the past while there are others who are negative. This essay will now examine both sides of the argument and end at a personal approach.
New technologies offer great advantages. To be precise, children are able to enjoy new technology through devices and games. For example, watching videos, playing games and using a smart phone. Due to that, most children spend their time indoors rather than outdoors and it holds that in between them. So, although they do not meet each other, they can play and have fun online. Moreover, they can make friends through it. Next, new technology can save the aspect of cost. other activities or enjoying free time outside can accrue costs. Also, new technology can replace other activities. For instance, VR is an imaginary experience. So, it is useful because they don’t need go out and buy anything. They can do all of the things just by only watching and moving through the VR.
However, we should not overlook drawbacks as well. Firstly, they can lose time with their parents. Children are fascinated by more developed technologies. Therefore, they may think more narrowly about their free time, and they might just prefer only electronic devices. Finally, they will be able to dangerous spending their free time only using the devices. Second they might be fat. Because when they are spending just inside their free time, they have not move and less activity. Therefore, they will be fat too easy.
To conclude, there are both advantages and disadvantages of this issue. However, from my perspective, continually developing technologies can have both in equal measure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
...technology can save the aspect of cost. other activities or enjoying free time outsid...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ed go out and buy anything. They can do all of the things just by only watching and moving...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'moved'.
Suggestion: moved
...t inside their free time, they have not move and less activity. Therefore, they will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, look, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11437908497 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63628080916 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2003373477 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.24 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.88 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297514200421 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799854823833 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613841978639 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174824712106 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158698149447 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.47 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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