News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?
It is true that choosing a news story to widely publish on television, the Internet, or newspapers is considered the editors’ responsibility. Therefore, their choices without doubt have a great impact on society. In my judgment, I agree that bad news has been familiar to people generally so far and I would welcome a better accentuation of positive news.
First and foremost, the deciding cause of choosing what news story to focus on is that producers are accountable for informing the public about important events and issues that will certainly help increase not only the community’s interest but also sales figures of the company. To exemplify, news stories on television, the Internet, and newspapers are the most accessible sources that people in Vietnam can get updated to Covid-19 vaccines to timely protect themselves and their family. Hence, editors must be aware of this situation and provide efficient and beneficial news in order to make a decisive contribution to the recognition of vaccination. Contrary to aforementioned beliefs, there are numerous pessimistic stories on television and newspapers every day.
It is justifiable that people are exposed to a daily basis story about a plethora of bad news about crime, disasters, political debate, and so on. Such continual stories may desensitize people, which enables the possibility for them to be cynical and skeptical that they can do anything to change it for the better. These shows, consequently, can be counterproductive. Furthermore, good news undeniably offers people an optimistic lifestyle. One case in point is that instead of showing disasters and a vast number of people have died in the central of Vietnam, charity activities and people who volunteer to help in their communities should be put on priority. This would put the audience in a better position to give a hand to the adversity and provide an incentive to the others. The eventual outcome could create solidarity in the nation.
On balance, although deciding which stories will be viral is undoubtedly difficult, there should be more positivity supplied by the news editors so as to create a mentally healthy lifestyle.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...positivity supplied by the news editors so as to create a mentally healthy lifestyle.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, as to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27377521614 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0604346092 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576368876081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8556017127 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269573051008 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797607287037 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523602498931 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162386710335 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243699770066 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...positivity supplied by the news editors so as to create a mentally healthy lifestyle.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, as to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27377521614 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0604346092 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576368876081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8556017127 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269573051008 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797607287037 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523602498931 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162386710335 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243699770066 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.