Nowadays both men and women spend much money on beauty care. This was not so in the past. What may be the root cause of this behaviour? Discuss the reasons and possible results.
Self Grooming concept has been gaining popularity and people has become more conscious regarding themselves from the last few decades. In ancient times, people love to play with natural ingredients extracted from plants and kitchen ingredients to polish and to remove the dead skin cells, dirt and pollution from the body.
The major factors leading to a surge in the usage of beauty care products; Technological innovations, an increased comfort level and social media. Firstly, with the advent of rapid innovations in the cosmetic industry and new formulations fascinating and urging the people to try and buy more viciously than ever before. Moreover, society has become independent, literate and educated eventually leading to a rise in the working individuals providing a cushion to the person with an increment in the spending power. Secondly, with better standard of living, both men and women starting investing in themselves with pamper routines, spa massages at home ultimately fulfilling a desire to look beautiful at any cost. Lastly, Celebrities, media influencers play a great role to whom the present generation look up a lot and now, folks also wanted to live the similar life further developing self love in the individuals.
The probable outcomes can be a diversion from the real beauty and recreating a different personality with options like surgeries, dependence on undue focus on doses that might evolves a person with the worst version of self. Moving ahead, usage of unreliable and endless products can lead to allergies and even devastating effects on the body of the person. Undue pressure will be imposed on that portion of the society, who wants to live by the natural beauty and can't afford such high-end products making them under-confidence and leftover in the world. Another main consequence might be self-obsession preparing a road for unscruplous spending of money that can be invested in other important sectors and interests such as self development and hobbies.
In Conclusion, to look smart and making good care of our own self is necessary whereas crossing a set limit will be dangerous and heart-breaking. Following a rat race that is happening in the cosmetic industry with the latest brands in the market everyday needs to be avoided in order to live a happy life otherwise it will put a hole in our pockets.
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- Nowadays both men and women spend much money on beauty care This was not so in the past What may be the root cause of this behaviour Discuss the reasons and possible results 89
- Nowadays both men and women spend much money on beauty care This was not so in the past What may be the root cause of this behaviour Discuss the reasons and possible results 89
- Nowadays both men and women spend much money on beauty care This was not so in the past What may be the root cause of this behaviour Discuss the reasons and possible results 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...econdly, with better standard of living, both men and women starting investing in...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17232375979 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89839812824 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600522193211 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.2216584992 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 152.384615385 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4615384615 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0885374932418 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294986419279 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285913473521 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465928694973 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291764504008 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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