Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this is a bad example to adolescents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, many traditional values have dramatically changed. There are lots of world- renowned individuals who are famous for their high living standards rather than their personal success. In my opinion, I strongly criticise this way of life owing to the fact that it can generate negative influence on the young generation.
On the one hand, this celebrity's wealthy acquisition provokes a squandered lifestyle. Having the easy money inherited from parents, they have the tendency to waste it for leisure activities rather than investing it to acquire a consolidated financial state. Britney Spears who was renowned as the Pop Princess is a prime example of this. Because of her impulsive buying, she now has to live in poverty and burdens an enormous debt. In the end, the far-reaching consequence is that the adolescents might imitate this lifestyle, ruining the future of a whole nation.
On the other side of the argument, only the success of celebrities is the thing that is worth learning. A memoir of one talented singer who overcame his adversity in order to chase ambition is always an inspirational story for the young generation. For instance, despite dropping out of university, Bill Gate fought his way through social prejudice and became a billionaire at a very young age. These personal achievements serve as the motivations for the adolescents to get out of the comfort zone and try to be the best at their field.
In all, the celebrity is the one who young people look up to and they can either provoke a squandered lifestyle or inspire them to be the better version of themselves. However, it is the adolescents who must have their own judgment to choose who to learn or to criticise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, as to, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93103448276 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85831910559 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610344827586 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0746303769 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223467608323 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691781476201 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592617775337 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128622591808 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400662815432 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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