Some people become famous when they are very young.
What are the advantages or disadvantages of this?
In today’s world, various individuals become famous when they were in the young generations. In this essay below, I will mention the positive and negative sides of this phenomenon.
In terms of positive aspects, becoming a well-known celebrity at a young age can make them financially independent. While their peers are relying on the parents’ economy to pay the bills related to education and medical services or they cannot purchase such favorable stuff to satisfy their cognitively without the assistance of parents, the young well-known people not only invest in themselves mentally and physically through their own earning money but also can decrease a part of the pressure on their parents economically. As a result, financial independence is the preeminent idea when becoming a famous adolescent.
Regarding the negative sides, illustrious young individuals might undergo the family’s and community’s criticism. When the scandal of them spread to social network sites, no matter what analysis is right or wrong, the community could judge them as wrongdoers of society and easily isolate these juvenile people which leads to several spiritual diseases such as stress, and depression. Not only that, several parents abuse their offspring’s early fame to take money for themselves. They will put pressure on their child and readily scold them if these kids do not adhere to them. Therefore, although these negative criticisms can affect them directly and indirectly, it can create invisible and visible heartbreak for them.
In conclusion, this phenomenon has both pessimistic and optimistic aspects which play a significant role in establishing behavior and emotion in these children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52490421456 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94082705425 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639846743295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.2412602021 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.090909091 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202649301513 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081130322192 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777933796543 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131178071032 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904283181399 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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