Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city.
Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people?
Recently, more and more youngsters decide to move to another city at an early age in purpose to study or work. This trend has both up sides and down sides. However, I believe the benefits still dominates the drawbacks.
First of all, the main reason for the young to go to another cities is to improve their general developments, it’s a great chance for them to step out of their comfort zones. When they relocate to a new place, they will have to adapt to new environment. In addition, they won’t have parents beside so they will be more independent and have to take care of themselves. In other words, they will control their lives and get much experience to build a better life in the future. The second advantage is that the youth may have more opportunities for careers and studies. For example, their home cities are not really developed, it’s understandable that they aren’t into living there. Therefore, they always want to settle down in another cities, which can bring them the chance to expand their education or jobs.
However, it seems a little dangerous for people, who are in the teen age, move outside of their cities because they may face many challenging problems while they are immature and cannot predict the consequences. For examle, if they cannot intergrate with the cultures or lifestyles there, they won’t be able to get well on with residents and relish the life in that areas. Furthermore, teenagers live far from their families so they would be upset or discouraged. It’s so hard to manage life on their own. Besides, I think if they have to decide everything themselves, they might go into the wrong ways.
To sum up, if teenagers move to another cities, they will benefit many things, but they also need to consider the negative aspects of this and should prepare all significant knowledge to adapt to a new life.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: teenage
...le dangerous for people, who are in the teen age, move outside of their cities because t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...predict the consequences. For examle, if they cannot intergrate with the cultures...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79192546584 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5511037755 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9322979143 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4375 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150675537897 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548162090396 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075695640696 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111186023831 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073712860517 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: teenage
...le dangerous for people, who are in the teen age, move outside of their cities because t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...predict the consequences. For examle, if they cannot intergrate with the cultures...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79192546584 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5511037755 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9322979143 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4375 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150675537897 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548162090396 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075695640696 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111186023831 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073712860517 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.