Nowadays, more and more people from different cities are spending more time away from their families. What are the possible reasons and the effects on the people themselves and their fami-lies?
Today, accompanied by economic growth, people are spending less time with their families. I think there are two main causes and a number of damaging effects.
The major cause is probably the huge volume of work that takes most of their time, because the average working person spends from six to eight hours per day at work. Besides, there are a number of other work tasks, ranging from extra time for short-term projects to business trips. In this era of immensely competitive jobs, everyone ought to try hard to do their best if they do not want to lose their job. This leads to the second reason for this problem, which is the burden of finance. There are numerous expenses that we ought to pay for, such as accommodation, food, or children’s study fees, which all depend on the income made from work.
The effects on themselves and their families can be quite serious. First, the gap between them and their family members will be formed because of the lack of time they spend talking to each other. This causes consequences, such as misunderstandings, less sympathy for the other mem-bers, and even divorce. Second, living in such a distant and conflicted family may impact nega-tively on their children, especially if they are in the growing stage, which is an emotional, inse-cure, and rebellious stage. As a result, children may feel disconnected from their parents and be-come involved in troubling situations. For example, decreasing academic records, falling into depression, or becoming a juvenile criminal.
To sum up, the causes of this trend are primarily to do with time spent working and financial pressure, and the effect on people and their family members is the separation between them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, second, so, for example, i think, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01748251748 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67373715245 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611888111888 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1838250534 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226592578844 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795700673657 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618511328129 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144246449141 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00872702816341 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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