Nowadays, more and more people from different cities are spending more time away from their families. What are the possible reasons and the effects on the people themselves and their fami-lies?
Nowadays, the world is more open, which means many people spend less time with their family members. In the essay below, I will analyze the causes, factors, and consequences of this phenomenon.
There are two top reasons why people spend less time with their families. First of all, due to the needs of modern life, people must always make an effort to earn money. They have to travel around for work or even go abroad to get better treatment. Furthermore, work takes up about a third of our day, sometimes requiring a few more hours of overtime. This makes them pressured and prone to stress from having to work too much. Therefore, it is difficult for them to balance work and time with their loved ones. Second, family members no longer spend time together because of modern technological devices. Family members spend all of that time using phones, TVs, or other electronic devices. Additionally, a family gathering is often interrupted by constant phone notifications. For these reasons, people gradually move away from their families.
Such a trend can be accompanied by a lot of negative effects on the emotional health and unity of individuals in a family. To begin with, people's lack of interaction and less communication with loved ones will reduce family affection and can lead to no longer really understanding each other, quarrels, misunderstandings, and possibly divorce. For example, a low-love environment will make family members feel lonely. Often, they will turn to adultery to find new love. When a marriage breaks down, there are severe consequences for the children of the couple. They will become dysfunctional or rebellious, bully others or commit crimes as a way to relieve themselves, vent anger, or seek parental attention. Consequently, the future seeds of the country were destroyed.
In conclusion, the modern lifestyle is the main reason why family time is getting less and less. There are many problems it causes, but the separating relationships that occur between family members is the most serious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, really, second, so, therefore, third, for example, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12312312312 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83676513402 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618618618619 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0538943657 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2380952381 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25850890676 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681470223442 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808406299435 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151911674321 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921254215245 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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