Nowadays, people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons for and effects on family and the society they live in?
In our time and age, individuals have a tendency to give birth late. This essay would elucidate the precursors for this and feasible influences on their family and society.
It is undeniable that financial stability is human’s top-priority leading to childbirth postponement. Admittedly, meeting personal demand urges people to gain a decent job with lucrative income rather than having babies. Therefore, individualism gains the prevalence in social stereotypes instilled by youngsters. In addition, it is espoused that children would be nurtured better by the mid-thirties who are generally affluent, experienced and willing to be in parenthood. Furthermore, women empowerment has extirpated old sentiments about the sole responsibility for looking after offspring. Females have been advocated to achieve the intrinsic human rights for working, relaxation and recreation.
In accordance with this phenomenon, the impacts are relatively diversified. On the positive side, having firstborn babies at the late stage of marriage is a catalyst of the deceleration in population volume. Moreover, human would not be interrupted by pregnancy and childcare in the flourishing period of their career. Children also bear fruits from higher living standard and civilization when their parents maintain prosperity. In stark contrast, cynical outcomes could be illustrated from late pregnancy. Obviously, old parents invariably encounter with the higher rate of infertility or struggling with mental disorders in children. It is noteworthy that there are numerous health risks for women in the prenatal and postnatal period such as depression or digestion-related diseases. In terms of society, the low birth quantity could create the aging population and the scarcity of young labor workforce that adversely affects national economic development.
In conclusion, having firstborn babies at the old age might be induced by several elements and exert both merits and demerits in family life as well as human society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81818181818 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17955667586 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649831649832 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3518011642 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.647058824 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158319184126 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042147789732 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371504847174 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963624739669 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125439752094 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.18 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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