Nowadays people spend much more time and money on their appearance than before. Do you agree or disagree?
Many believe that people use more cosmetics or buy more clothes than they used to before. I agree with the fact that people spend more resources on their appearance and I see it mostly from a commercial and technological point of view.
One of the impactful trends to buy more is consumerism which is growing globally. Consumerism is what I see everywhere. Every industry tries to persuade their customers that they need their products by making powerful advertisements. By seeing such colorful advertisements, people are not content anymore with what they already have. Cosmetic and beauty industry is a good example. This industry produces so many versatile products and then make it well publicized. Young girls and women are tempted to buy more and more of such stuffs to look younger and beautiful.
Moreover, I consider technology so inviting for most of us and it grew exponentially in recent decades. Take social media and augmented reality (AR) for instance. With social media companies promote new lifestyles and also use digital marketing methods to invite people to purchase their product. Augmented reality is used to imagine a dress virtually on an electronic screen. Therefore, one will enjoy what is going on and tries so many clothes whether which one to buy and shopper will purchase through this stimulating experience.
In brief, due to growth of consumerism and commercialism people invested so much money and time on garments, beauty stuff and so on. Technology has played an effective role on the road to consumerism too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...ore clothes than they used to before. I agree with the fact that people spend more resources on their ap...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... stuffs to look younger and beautiful. Moreover, I consider technology so invit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13438735178 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87148097507 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.409392392 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1875 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198930531983 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547421830278 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734381557921 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133297776467 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104997037127 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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