Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
some people argue that the growth of technology has considerably led to some human security-threatening recordings, stalking calls and surveillance videos, for instance, while they do not realize that they are witnessed. On the contrary, others advocate that these supervisors have their own advantages to protect residents from enormous emerging cases. both sides along with my preference for the latter idea will be outlined in the following essay.
On the one hand, using monitoring tools seems to be illegal in some situations. these devices are complained to be unfavorable since citizens are not informed about the activities. Hence, people frequently regard these as rights and freedom stolen as they are aware that they should have their own privacy. Furthermore, under some circumstances, the recording receivers can abuse their authority to threaten the victims for money or even sell them without permission to enhance their financial budget.
On the other hand, the existence of CCTV in public places and mobile phone tracking also brings numerous benefits to both governments and individuals, mainly by criminal catchments. Being caught off guard, the thieves can easily be arrested by the spy cameras, which could support the police a lot in preventing and investigating crimes with more undoubted evidence. Moreover, like some Android systems, the call is automatically recorded, which also helps to collect certain important witnesses for several cases.
To conclude, although using advanced technology to monitor inhabitants’ activities while it is not socialized is unacceptable because it may be against human’s freedom, this secret equipment dedicates the police to look into the culprit. Therefore, in my perspective, I do believe that the positive sides dominate the negative ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62909090909 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02813255603 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4918413171 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208686205703 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661664687118 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496503168763 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116606733203 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204175137054 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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