In order to be successful in sport, some people think you have to be physically strong. Others say that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is believed by some that strength is a crucial element to become successful in sport, while others think mental health is more important. From my viewpoint, though physical abilities are essential to becoming an athlete, a strong mind is a key to success.
Becoming sportsmen requires a healthy body as they have to work out intensely. Athletes usually practice under a lot of pressure to improve their strength and flexibility. It is because in a long match such as a football match, players have to move almost full time, which requires a lot of energy. So if their body cannot adapt to that condition, their team will struggle. As a result, every member of a team must train their durability and physical strength so that they can become a good player and perform excellently in a real match.
Nevertheless, possessing huge power is not enough to become the best sportsman, but also mental toughness, especially in terms of team sports. In a real match, everything is possible, even a team full of beasts can lose if they make a minor mistake and lose patience, leaving their opponents turning the game upside down. Thus, sports require the players to be determined and they need to train their minds seriously. In my opinion, the team with stronger minds is more valuable because in times of hardship, they will never surrender and find a way to change the current result, leading their team to the champion.
In conclusion, having good physical abilities is necessary but training for mental health is far more considerable. Therefore, people should know how to balance their training time in order to become successful in the sport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ball match, players have to move almost full time, which requires a lot of energy. So if ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9247311828 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69248876822 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573476702509 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4595909899 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18044935103 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685800214717 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683477959914 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131821884656 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768755009146 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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