OVER POPULATION IS A BIG PROBLEM. discuss both views and give your opinion?
The increase in number of people in this world is becoming a major issue, which is not focused by authorities of many countries. In my opinion, the population is increasing at a high rate, with less emphasis to maintain it.
Over population is due to many reasons, which can be sectioned into three categories as follows, firstly, the development in medical facilities has lead to the decrease in death rate, many diseases are being cured and people are being saved from dying and the life expectancy has increased, the death of a woman during child birth has decreased to its minimum. these are leading to a decrease in death and increase in birth rate which directly effects the population.
Secondly, the factor which is leading to the increase in population is poverty, poverty causes illiteracy which leads to bad family planning and have effect on the society by increasing population. these people have less resources to live easily, which leads to starvation, and bad health. than these people move to urban areas and burden the local management, the increase in accommodation is needed an increase number of food is required, which may also lead to famine, the job opportunity decreases for local people. these problems should be focused and the government should build schools and starts planning on organizing social welfare events to spread the awareness for the control of population.
To sum up, the problem is increasing day by day and need focus from the authorities of the area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71205014703 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1895275151 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.444444444 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948585109465 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387631976949 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357160336711 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611063330726 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106853705542 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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