One of major issues facing world today is over population. What problem arise from this situation? What measures can be taken to deal with it?
The problem of booming population has been long a serious matter for the majority of nations in the world. Several problems have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by a number of effective solutions.
Two of the biggest threats posed by overpopulation are escalating environment problems and the worsen unemployment. First of all, the environment would be the most severely affected because rising number of people means that an increasing amount of carbon dioxide would be emitted through more transportation vehicles and industrial activities. This would eventually give rise to serious and hard to tackle problems like global warming and climate change. Another alarming issue originating from population explosion is the lack of job opportunities. Since job vacancies are limited in many places around the world, a considerable number of people may face unemployment. As a result, over-populated regions can experience a leap in rates of crime like thefts, as people want to feed their families.
Since these issues are serious, I think the most effective way would be for governments to invest in education. Firstly, people in countries, especially developing countries, need to understand the impact of having many children. Once they are aware of the mentioned problems that overpopulation brings, they will be discouraged from bearing more children. However, in order to achieve the goal, households need to be cognizant of efficient family planning and birth control so that would be the second measure. In fact, governments can hold regular classes on sex education for people from adolescences to adults to equip them with useful knowledge.
In conclusion, to efficiently mitigate the impacts of overpopulation on the natural and social life, proper and suitable education needs to be provided to the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...are escalating environment problems and the worsen unemployment. First of all, the environ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4425087108 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04491342606 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7723284221 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20667011583 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691497969167 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387872748081 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121391647591 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608403984967 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.