Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
There are controversial opinions about change in life nowadays. Some people choose to live a stable life and make no changes while others assert that change is beneficial for them.
Those that hold the opinion that they would keep their lives stable, may have some advantages. Firstly, they are very familiar with the environment where they live in which help them to keep in touch with their families and friends in order to build up a very close relationship. In addition, long lasting situation in career will promote the expertise of staff. For instance, workers will become an expert in the areas which they stay for a very long time.
Other people that choose to embrace changes maybe benefit from meeting new opportunities. For example, many people take changing jobs from one company to another as a method of getting promotion and higher salary. Moreover, they could also have the chance to experience different works by meeting different people so that life is not boring. Through this process, they can make new friends, learn new knowledge and experience different lives. More importantly, people may find what they really like by keep trying, which will help them to build up interest in life and get more achievements.
Considering what has been discussed above, I personally think that both have their merits as long as people like their choices and take responsibilities. Many times, the roads of life is about choices, with no one road better that others. What is more, people can also change their mind whenever they find that their current situation is not so satisfying. People living an unchanging life may want to have some new attempts, while others keeping changing may find what they think is comfortable and settle down.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, really, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01369863014 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5304859176 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541095890411 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.293377374 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205755866976 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811403602775 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752553685571 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152060395152 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759752781149 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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