In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Thanks to the development of technology such as the Internet and smartphones, individuals no longer have to go to workplaces to complete their tasks as they used to. Personally, I think that this trend brings about both benefits and drawbacks.
It can be said that working from home has some noteworthy positive points. The main strength of this is saving money and time. Indeed, if you travel to workplaces, there are multifarious kinds of fees that you have to pay such as petroleum, parking fees. In addition, it takes more time to be ready and travel to workplaces than do it at home. Moreover, people feel more comfortable when working at home, they are not observed by the managers. As a result, individuals are more enjoyable and creative, so they will do their job more effectively. Thus, work productivity might be increased.
On the other hand, there are some negative aspects of this trend that should be taken into consideration. The main disadvantage is the lack of necessary equipment, you may not have enough dedicated machines. As a consequence, work might not be completed as well as at the workplace. Another minus point of working at home is the lack of communication and interaction, which leads to some misunderstandings among employees. Furthermore, many people find it difficult to separate personal work from the general one. All the aforementioned weaknesses will affect negatively the work result.
In conclusion, working at home could bring about certain benefits, but its negative consequences should not be overlooked
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14229249012 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10127352602 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604743083004 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7449182793 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3125 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280073668994 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834980432765 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518241396283 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146057747107 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650228458833 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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