In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
ontemporarily, going shopping is considered as a go-to leisure activity rather than a mission that people have to do frequently as it used to be. Personally, I slightly agree that this trend could bring about benefits to individuals, but there are also potential issues that they have to confront while having fun.
Shopping has appeared as a form of entertainment. A vast majority of people nowadays, especially feminine women, allocate an excessive amount of time to hit all-in-one shopping malls and purchase a lot of mandatory things with personal necessities in order to not only prepare their relatives with sufficient merchandise but also help themselves relieve the stress made from workplaces where make them overthink about their situations. Moreover, going shopping in company with their friends could strengthen the relationship among them and offer numerous opportunities for them to build up interpersonal skills that are highly recommended at public places such as communicative ones, which will act as a precursor to their capability of improvising when facing unfamiliar circumstances.
On the other hand, however, going shopping consumes a considerable amount of free time, which means that individuals who take it as a leisure hobby will not have time for other intensive physical activities such as getting involved in soccer matches or enrolling in karate or yoga courses as methods of meditation that will make them become more corporally healthy. Besides, it could also contribute to people's reckless use of money as they just impulsively buy unnecessary merchandise that will not be utilized for any internal purposes due to several tempting advertisements, leading to a growth in waste product patterns.
To conclude, it seems to me that even though shopping is indeed less monotonous than it was before industrialization, it should not be totally regarded as a positive trend as customers could only get certain benefits from it compared to them taking physical exercises as a hobby
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ontemporarily
ontemporarily, going shopping is considered as a go-t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, moreover, so, then, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36708860759 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10252493169 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636075949367 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.053279738 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.0 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121196471653 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567343309657 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386274270509 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806336993174 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415482757504 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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