People think that children nowadays have more freedom.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's rapid evolving world, the notion of freedom for children is atopic of debate. children today enjoy greater freedom due to technical advancement and modern approach to bring up the child. In my opinion, i agree with this notion as children have more opportunities to do anything they wants, but there are some restrictions and pressure and fear of parents curb children's freedom.
To commence with, new generation's children are enjoying more freedom than previous generation because advancement in technology has beneficial to children freedom of explore anything they want. To explain, in this digital age young people have access to amenities like internate which is very useful for them as they can attain abundance knowledge about the world and also get the information about their study subjects very easily.
Furthermore, another prominent reason why teenager and children are having more freedom, as in this new modernize era, parents is becoming so open minded people. So, proffer freedom of coice to children. In other words, new generation's parents are well educated and follow foreign culture. Hence, they can give children rights to choose manifold crucial decisions of life such as, career path and what to be in future. As a result, individuals can get chance to live life according to their beliefs and likes.
However, despite the aforementioned arguments, it is important to acknowledge that children's freedom has also faced constraints in recent years. Firstly, the advent of technology has resulted in increased surveillance and monitoring. Because parents and school authorities are concerned about children's safety in this inimical society leads to put some limitations on children to explore their surrounding freely and independently. Secondly, due to ever increase competition among youngsters, children have to do hard work to reamin in it, because of this children put their all efforts in excellence in academics and improve status in society as parents pressure on them. As a result, children not have free time to spends doing other curricular activities with their friends.
In recapitulation, despite facing some detrimental situations of not having freedom to explore. I deem that children get sufficient time and freedom to explore the world and should use this to make career and future life better. Some restrictions are necessary for overall development of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...eedom for children is atopic of debate. children today enjoy greater freedom due to tech...
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Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h to bring up the child. In my opinion, i agree with this notion as children have...
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Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
... more opportunities to do anything they wants, but there are some restrictions and pr...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have access to amenities like internate which is very useful for them as they ca...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... very useful for them as they can attain abundance knowledge about the world and ...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ded people. So, proffer freedom of coice to children. In other words, new generat...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to manifold'
Suggestion: to manifold
...they can give children rights to choose manifold crucial decisions of life such as, care...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to manifold'.
Suggestion: to manifold
...they can give children rights to choose manifold crucial decisions of life such as, care...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...life such as, career path and what to be in future. As a result, individuals can ...
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Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...fe such as, career path and what to be in future. As a result, individuals can get chanc...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42328042328 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86104475874 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560846560847 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0526073024 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.888888889 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272488345922 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904007725362 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614776262791 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162783613366 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040668496979 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...eedom for children is atopic of debate. children today enjoy greater freedom due to tech...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h to bring up the child. In my opinion, i agree with this notion as children have...
^
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
... more opportunities to do anything they wants, but there are some restrictions and pr...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have access to amenities like internate which is very useful for them as they ca...
^^
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... very useful for them as they can attain abundance knowledge about the world and ...
^^
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ded people. So, proffer freedom of coice to children. In other words, new generat...
^^
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to manifold'
Suggestion: to manifold
...they can give children rights to choose manifold crucial decisions of life such as, care...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to manifold'.
Suggestion: to manifold
...they can give children rights to choose manifold crucial decisions of life such as, care...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...life such as, career path and what to be in future. As a result, individuals can ...
^^
Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...fe such as, career path and what to be in future. As a result, individuals can get chanc...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42328042328 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86104475874 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560846560847 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0526073024 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.888888889 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272488345922 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904007725362 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614776262791 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162783613366 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040668496979 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.