The Percentage Of Overweight Children In Western Society Has Increased By Almost 20%
The proportion of obese children in western society has increased gradually by 20% in past 10 years.
Firstly, Fast food joints are immensely popular among children and youth. In past 10 years, technology has grown by leaps and bounds introducing food service delivery partners that provide more option for children to indulge in junk food. Advertisements, various varieties of different food and easy availability make it look very attractive to them. Parents play a very important role in maintaining their dietary lifestyle. They need to personally keep a tab on child diet to ensure they are consuming healthy food. Moreover, a child should be encouraged to play outdoor games but they are so engrossed in playing games, surfing social networking sites on phone all the time making them lethargic and adding to their obesity. They are losing interest in outdoor activities that helps them to keep fit. Indulgence more often in junk food and very minimal healthy activities are the major cause in obesity in past decade.
Unfortunately, over weight comes with its own set of disadvantages .An obese child invites more diseases leading to his sedentary lifestyle, which initially he finds to be very excited. Children should not develop this habit to consume fast food as it will be very harmful for them in future as they grow. There are so many examples where children are facing major issue with their digestive system and succumb to infections which make their immunity low.
To conclude, children should developed a habit of healthy food and playing outdoor activities that will make them fit and help to maintain the weight
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11567164179 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62973416568 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2490502677 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.461538462 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100663646942 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464187791536 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957439069619 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121026151532 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143056189924 0.056905535591 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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