At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
World population are increasing rapidly. However, at present scenario , some countries has larger younger population as compaired, to older population. Although, older population of country cannot be ignored, the advantages of having younger population of country outweigh the disadvantages and this essay will discuss why.
The greatest benefit of having surplus younger generation in a particular country is having surplus working population. The younger generation are able to work so, they are productive and helps to contribute in economy. For example, In India, 40% consists of younger population out of total population so, it is third largest economy in the world. Thus, younger population are productive in nature as they are able to work.
The main challenges of surplus younger population are that they are burden to particular country for providing health facilities and employment. If the country are not able to provide basic amenities like health services and employment then, it would lead to criticisms and economic burden to the government. For instance, In china, 400 billions yen is spent on the health services and government workers which cost 10% of its financial budget.
To conclude, it will create a economic burden on the country to provide health services and employment for the younger population.
All things considered, population growth is serious issues in the world. Country having excess younger population are more advantageous as, their are productive and have working population so, they are beneficial to the economy of the country whereas, it can be disadvantageous due to economic cost involved in providing health facilities and employment. I believe personally the benefits in terms of having surplus younger population outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55474452555 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97301583253 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485401459854 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.89953719 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153579664156 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660040478324 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566721960138 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101807481236 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715211517026 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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