Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Information around the world are conveyed through televisions, newspaper. Few people assumed that it is good idea for sharing of essential information in scientific research, business and the academic world however, others believed that critical information which are important and valuable should not be shared freely. This essay will discuss the both sides before drawing conclusion.
The sharing of essential information in scientific research, business and academic world would spread awareness and problems can be efficiently solved. The people would be get updated if information are passes freely through news channels and the problems of project completion can be solved if critical information are shared. For example, the research and development outcomes of scienctist for vaccines formula helps to produce vaccines easily. Thus it is essential to share information for spreading awareness and problem solving.
The critical information should not be shared freely due to safety purposes and misusing. The vital information which are important to nations should not be shared at the lower level as, these information can be misused and can take advantages by third party. For example, army posting to various regions should not be shared as, it be misused by terroist. To conclude, critical information should be probhited due to safety issues and misusing.
To conclude, information can be easily accessible through news channels. This essay discussed one side of sharing information beneficial for scientific research, business and academic and other sides, why vital information should not shared freely. In my opinion, information that is helpful for spreading awareness and problem solving to scientific research, business and academic should be transferred whereas, vital information should not transferred freely due its misusing and safety purposes.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rmula helps to produce vaccines easily. Thus it is essential to share information fo...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...ld not be shared at the lower level as, these information can be misused and can take advantages ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ous regions should not be shared as, it be misused by terroist. To conclude, criti...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'share'
Suggestion: share
...sides, why vital information should not shared freely. In my opinion, information that...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 443, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'transfer'
Suggestion: transfer
...d whereas, vital information should not transferred freely due its misusing and safety purp...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 466, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ation should not transferred freely due its misusing and safety purposes.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, thus, whereas, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76258992806 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88320516172 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453237410072 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2499894149 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393124226553 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163540099921 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114155735388 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288877932107 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923229717215 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rmula helps to produce vaccines easily. Thus it is essential to share information fo...
^^^^
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...ld not be shared at the lower level as, these information can be misused and can take advantages ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ous regions should not be shared as, it be misused by terroist. To conclude, criti...
^^
Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'share'
Suggestion: share
...sides, why vital information should not shared freely. In my opinion, information that...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 443, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'transfer'
Suggestion: transfer
...d whereas, vital information should not transferred freely due its misusing and safety purp...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 466, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ation should not transferred freely due its misusing and safety purposes.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, thus, whereas, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76258992806 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88320516172 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453237410072 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2499894149 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393124226553 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163540099921 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114155735388 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288877932107 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923229717215 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.