Public libraries should provide books and not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or Dvds. Do you agree or disagree?
Libraries are the lighthouse for all illumination seekers and the gateway to past, better present and future. It is undisputable to provide a rich variety of books in all public libraries for all readers sake, but the high-tech publishing resources on the other hand are questionable. The upcoming words will try to balance between whether the resources of public libraries should be totally spent on paper books, or some of it should go to the new facilitating technologies.
Technological advancements in the fields of publishing, such as electronic books and videotaped DVDs have invaded the reader’s world. Accessibility, facilitated by the internet, gave it domination over the vintage books to be in every reader’s, not only house or desk, but also pocket. But what about the public libraries? In my point of view, it needs some of these technologies to indulge readers to attend. Furthermore, it will make the life of the attendant easier in searching for information on the internet. Even an explanatory video on a CD or DVD provided by the library to explain a topic on a book is a mandatory clog in the wheel of education to whom who seek knowledge in public libraries. Some of these higher technologies are even cheaper than some printed books and do not cost much. Accordingly, whether the public libraries have a remarkably limited resource or not, it should provide some sort of new technologies in media.As a reader, the scent of a new book, or even an old heritage book provides me with some sort of euphoria and excitement for the new adventure I am about to have. Without these books, we wouldn't even have these high-tech media to begin with. As a result, there is no doubt that books are the pillars of the public libraries and should have the lion’s share of the library’s budget. Afterward, if the budget allows for more facilitating media equipment, then it’s a must to invest in.In a nutshell, public libraries have a limited financial income that should be well spent. In my humble opinion, it is obligatory for the financial blueprint to provide part of technology in the library experience for a lot of purposes such as research and facilitation.
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...go to the new facilitating technologies. Technological advancements in the fields...
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... some sort of new technologies in media.As a reader, the scent of a new book, or...
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... about to have. Without these books, we wouldnt even have these high-tech media to begi...
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...cilitating media equipment, then it’s a must to invest in.In a nutshell...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, no doubt, sort of, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27642276423 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.43672639053 2.80592935109 194% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525745257453 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.980702535 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.071428571 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294841073725 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101121776592 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661022210223 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235754585107 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293999577728 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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