Public libraries should provide books and not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or Dvds. Do you agree or disagree?
Public libraries play an essential role in the local community by providing access to information, supporting education, promoting lifelong learning, and also serving as a community gathering space. It’s argued that the public libraries have to offer more books than expensive high-tech media like software, DVDs, or videos to not waste their money. This essay will argue why books have an important role in society and if it’s necessary to have high-tech in public libraries.
As it’s mentioned in the introduction, the public libraries have many important educational roles in our society, so it’s important for the libraries to offer more books so that everyone can learn and get a ton of information while they're just enjoying reading a book. And getting information while you enjoy it is not just educationally important, but it’s also important because it’s healthy for the brain. Why would you let your brain get tired because you have used your cellphone or your computer just to get information when you can easily get that information from a "real book" and your brain won’t get tired? On the contrary, while someone reads, his brain will work better because when you read, your brain will automatically develop, and he will also develop the analysis. Moreover, the economy plays an important role in this case. Because for the library itself, it’s cheaper to get a ton of books than a high-tech media. And that’s why it is important that the public libraries have to offer more books.
On the other hand, it’s also important to afford high-tech media because, even though it’s more expensive than books, the libraries will buy them once and not every day like books. And as we live in an advanced era, it’s really important to buy them because, for the students, for example, it’s easier for them to search for information on the internet than in many books because the books will take them more time to find that information than the internet. And also, for people at this time, it’s more likely to understand a new thing by listening and watching. And even for kids, it’s harder for them to understand or learn something by reading it. That’s why libraries are unfortunately starting to abandon. And for that reason, the public libraries have to provide high-tech media to encourage people to spend some time in the libraries.
The essay argued that offering more books has the same importance as affording expensive high-tech media in public libraries. In my opinion, high-tech media; like software, DVDs, or videos, has an important role in public libraries because even the libraries have to develop, and there are always different types of people. For example, there are a lot of people nowadays that prefer watching or listening to reading, but there are other people that prefer reading from real books. And that’s why public libraries have to contain real books and high-tech media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... a new thing by listening and watching. And even for kids, it’s harder for them to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, while, for example, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2466.0 1615.20841683 153% => OK
No of words: 486.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.589304859 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407407407407 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 757.8 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 15.0 0.809619238477 1853% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.650299281 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.3 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249254252113 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106323824232 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102468559863 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194492471208 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773270489898 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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