Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, studies indicates that crime has take a place between the minors in the last few years. The psychology experts say the main reason for this cause is that kids are not giving the enough education about emotional and social life from their family and school. This essay is completely disagreed with this explanation because if the complicated nature of the human being. This essay will first look at how poverty motivate the young people to attitude in a violence way and then discuss why the surrounded environment has massive impact on the kids life.
From overall perspective, there are a wide range of reasons for this phenomenon, perhaps the main motivation for that is the poverty that also spread recently. The more poverty, the more crimes in the society. As a result the hunger caused by the poverty motivate the young boys and girls to steal or murder in order to fulfill their needs. For example. The average rate of felony in rich countries such as Canada or Netherlands is lower than the poor nations like South Africa.
Without doubt. The environment where the kid has grown up effects deeply the behavior of that child, children who learn from watching more that telling. In other words if a boy rose up in a cruel and dangerous space definitely he will act the same way even when he became an adult.
In conclusion, increasing the minor crimes recently can be explained by many methods and reasons. Personally, I believe that the fundamental reason for this is the poverty. Giving helping hand to the unfortunate inhabitants will be the best to solve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83882783883 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51012253841 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5021436124 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.615384615 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171425690769 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533479789141 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451675043633 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960304994203 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253104472738 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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