Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, teenagers demonstrate a lot of violent crimes. A group of researchers says that unquestionably that because of the gap between young people and their family or school. This essay will argue the roots of this problem and who is should in charge of this?
A hand of parents believe that they should provide unconditional love and experience till their children’s grows enough to gain the responsibility. Because they paid for the child schools, they reckon they have the responsibility to teach them about the ethical and constitution of the city. A prime example of that, schools, governments and each one have his rules to protect the society.
If the country constructed on silly foundations like points mentioned above that would lead to a lot of misperceptions between community and children’s. Despite there is no right to anyone to be out of the laws, but there are a combination works between family’s and schools to make these youngsters ready to cope and serve their motherland. Families should avoid to use the abuse to learn their children, instead of that they should using an empathy and nurturing, which important to counteraction of illegal crimes among this generation. For instance, monthly attended to social sessions talked about the potential of miss this basics.
In conclusion, violent crimes among youngsters could be the responsibility for families or teachers only or may be for both of them. However my take on this that there is no way to decrease this vital issue without sharing the rules among us which led to demise this type of crimes.
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...ich led to demise this type of crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09160305344 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91466136275 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2333471417 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211134243783 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676636372827 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482770498974 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119299337995 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412626475587 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.