Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people give a recommendation that the developed countries should give more types of support for the poor countries instead of helping them tackle their fianacial problems by giving money. Since these people claim that this assistance can not give these poor countries a solution for their poverty. In my point of view, I can not say that I agree competely with this statement because providing these types of countries a new and modern policies of education can help them face with poverty. Meanwhile the money can also help poor nations solve poverty by having a clear plan.
Firstly, the rich nations can support them by providing policies for education which may help the poor ones escape from poverty. Because the poor countries not only have a low standard of living or debts but also have a poor education. Hence, these types of nations tend to engcourage the teenagers or even children who are not guilty by the age under 18 to work for family's financial problems. This mainly cause the poor education which is one of the most reason make countries can not tackle its trouble, specifically, poverty. This why our country, Vietnamese, took a long time to improve the residents' level of educaiton in the past. For example, the recent years, USA has supported Vietnam in policies of eduction for university. As a result, more and more student can expand their English skills and can also have a high salary in multiple national companies
Last but not least, money can also a nice solution for escaping from poverty but it demands a pretty clear plan. Because in the poor countries, money will tackle a range of their problems like medical industry, standard of living, or especially debt. Yet these money should be use in a matching situations. They should give a greate plan to list which is the first and the worst trouble that the money should be use in. In other words, giving money is not a useless method but it also demad a suitable useage. For instance, Cuba use a money from Vietnam for improving the medicine in the Covid 19 pandemic. As they recognize that, if their residents got into Covid trouble, they will be die or at least they can not be a normal employees as before when they are not injected
In short, it can not be said that giving money from the rich can not help the poor ones solve poverty, because if they have a greate plan enough, it can help them deal with this problem. Also, providing some matching policies for their education is a nice solution because the lower level of education, the poorer countries are.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...cation can help them face with poverty. Meanwhile the money can also help poor nations so...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...dard of living, or especially debt. Yet these money should be use in a matching situations....
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ecially debt. Yet these money should be use in a matching situations. They should g...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'situation'?
Suggestion: situation
...these money should be use in a matching situations. They should give a greate plan to list...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... worst trouble that the money should be use in. In other words, giving money is not...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Cuba) must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...d a suitable useage. For instance, Cuba use a money from Vietnam for improving the...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'employee'?
Suggestion: employee
...ie or at least they can not be a normal employees as before when they are not injected ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, while, at least, for example, for instance, in short, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 447.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73378076063 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42221657003 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460850111857 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6184881324 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.555555556 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247313113967 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918275684964 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858247185009 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178158937316 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954321766765 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.