Scientists and technology experts seen to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree
In this modern era scientists and technology experts plays major role along with they are more indispensable to society in comparison to musicians and artists. This essay will delve deeper into matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, indeed it is true that scientists and technology experts are more vital to developing nation and it can be seen in numerous ways such as, in present time scientists finding finding out the cure of many death causing disease which making society all right and healthy a good illustration of this is nowadays, whole world is suffering from covid19 virus which is originated from China in this situation USA came forward to run up against by innovation of vaccine and assist world to overcome in this scientists are major key of success this how they are crucial to us and now the world is fully vaccinated. Moreover, in 20th century is the era of high tech equipment every individual is connected to gadgets so that a technology analysis and expert plays most essential for instance, at this time all type of machinery and other as well as other daily use stuffs run on technology and if their any fault raise the the technology expert come to fix it so this how they are operative today's generation is totally depend upon these professionals and there is no way to quit there services
On the other hand, while giving all importance to scientists and technology experts individual should never avoid the contribution of musicians and artists because they keep reviving our tradition and culture which help to recall how the stuffs are originated in past along with they all have essential use so in this when it comes to see the working techniques of our ancient because musicians and artists follow the techniques, However, they are the major key for society. Furthermore, they teaches a lot to our youth.
In conclusion, technology and science really influence the era but every profession has specific role to play we can asses to quickly on this basis of achievements both are vital to society on the basis of their role
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82777777778 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65683372308 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536111111111 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 330.140205906 49.4020404114 668% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 289.666666667 106.682146367 272% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.0 20.7667163134 289% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.5 7.06120827912 333% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188913284361 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911001275213 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879887330383 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116933762846 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048231313118 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.3 13.0946893788 239% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 50.2224549098 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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